Sunday, 22 March 2015

Evaluation Question 3 - Louise Fontava



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As a group we chose Crystal Whites this is because we are all fans of their music. To start our music video, we began researching into their existing audience demographic. However as we personally knew the band before, we felt we had a good grasp of the age range who enjoyed this band.

We went onto their Facebook and Twitter pages to see the ages of the people they had following them. From this, and our own knowledge of the band, we decided our music video would function around males and females around the age range of 16-24. This age was also identified as we have been at numerous Crystal White gigs, where we were able to see those who frequently came along. Luckily, each member of our group liked the Indie/Rock genre and were familiar with various bands of the same genre. These include bands like Arctic Monkeys, The Kooks and The Foo Fighters. We researched into these bands and gathered key elements which we believed were essential at appealing to our target audience. An example of this was to include a subtle yet understandable narrative. Through research we noticed the Indie/Rock genre tends to steer clear of a long narrative as they revolve their videos more around them actually playing. This is something we felt we needed to incorporate into our music video.

You-tube played a key role in letting me see what elements to feature in a music video, but also to visually watch live performances of bands in the same genre, allowing us to analyse their audiences, gaining a clearer understanding of who my target audience would be. Furthermore, radio stations such as X FM enabled us to find examples of bands similar to that of Crystal Whites. We soon realised that the target audience age of the genre was very wide, adding to our decision to focus on 16-24 year olds.
We next needed to attain an understanding of what our target audience enjoys throughout the Indie/Rock genre of music videos. To start with, we asked a random sample of people within my age bracket if they liked/listened to bands in the Indie/Rock genre. This gave us a starting point to our questionnaires. If they liked them, they could respond to my follow up questions, and those who didn’t like them could write that down. In total we found that around 60% of people we asked said they enjoyed Indie/Rock music, whereas the remainder typically listened to other genres like Pop and classical. The next question we asked those who answered yes, was “what element do you think is most important for making an Indie/Rock genre music video successful?”
A: A strong narrative
B: Close up shots of the band playing
C: Both

The majority of people answered C: Both. They felt having both balances out the music video. Additionally, we wanted to see the ages they felt mostly listened to Indie/Rock genre music, so we continued the research by asking “what do you think is the age range for people who enjoy this genre?” These answers were mixed, however the option for older teens still came out to be the most popular. I would say it was important that we carried this out, as we were able to write down what our target audience preferred, and incorporate it into our music video.

Before filming, we presented our idea to a group of people, highlighting exactly what we were planning on carrying out. At the end of the presentation, our audience were able to share their views. At this point, we were certain of an idea of filming on top of a roof, using ‘the stripes’ as inspiration for this. Despite really liking this idea and thinking it could work, our audience told us it just wouldn’t be possible. This was due to a number of reasons, such as; accessibility and heath and safety. We were also asked during this pitch about our narrative, as we group we hadn’t yet decided who would feature in our narrative, however after the conversation during our presentation, we sat down and came up with a suitable person for our video. Without this pitch, we wouldn’t have known how a large group of people felt about our initial idea. From this our good ideas and bad ideas had been highlighted and we knew what we needed to change. This enabled our video to be the best it can be, by listening to our initial feedback.

Once we had finished filming the music video, and had finished the postproduction stage, we presented the first draft of our music video to a number of people within our target audience age group. We felt using single people to give their feedback works better than using a smaller group of around 6 people. We argued that individuals hear what their friends have said and is influenced by their choice. This means our feedback wouldn’t be reliable. To combat this we didn’t include a focus group into our audience feedback, we just stuck to asking single people our questions.

In relation to our print products, audience feedback was vital. We produced a magazine advert and a digipack, however without constructive criticism from our audience they wouldn’t look how they look today. For example we created our first magazine using inspiration from the band “Conduit”, and their album “Funeral for a friend”. We liked how they featured their band members at the bottom of the page. As a result we tried it by heavily editing an image we previously captured of our band. This involved matching our background and following it up to create the illusion of the sky at the top, and the band members at the bottom of the page. Unfortunately due to lack of experience in the Photoshop field, it didn’t go how we had envisaged. Despite knowing our image didn’t look perfect, we played around and created a first draft of our magazine anyway.

We presented this draft to members of our target audience and we attained a number of useful criticisms. For example, we were told our text wasn’t appropriate for an Indie/Rock genre music video. Secondly a lot of people failed to understand all the empty space above the bands image. A common view of our magazine draft was that it doesn’t stand out. Although we created this from being inspired by the band “Conduit”, w e just weren’t capable of producing something similar to that standard. As a result of our audience feedback, we were able to note down the elements our audience had told us didn’t work, and what they felt would work better. However, we decided to just scrap our draft completely and start over. One major element we gathered from our feedback was how most Indie/Rock genres present their band members playing instruments on the cover of their magazine adverts.  This was due to it standing out to an audience and also how it conforms to their genre. Luckily, our process of making a second magazine was a lot easier. We had already been told what our target audience liked from a magazine and therefore felt it was easier. Once our second draft had been completed, we needed to gather another set of feedback. We were told it was very eye catching due to the bright colours and a good representation of members from an Indie/Rock genre. However, a few members still didn’t like it. They argued that something was missing and influenced us to include a quotation. This appears on a lot of magazine adverts and we realised we should include one as it gives an element of realism to our work. Additionally, we changed our font around our digipak outline. This was to increase how much our advert should stand out to our audience. For a final time, we presented our final draft and we were told it was very good. Without our feedback on our first and second draft, we wouldn’t have known exactly what the public didn’t like, and we wouldn’t have been able to make improvements.

Another example of where audience feedback has been essential is through our digipak, including what image to use but also what font to use. In the same way as the magazine we produced a digipak draft. After audience feedback we transformed our digipak completely. After showing a group of people, we were informed the font wasn’t easy to read and it didn’t stand out. Also, our actual picture didn’t enable their faces to be easily seen. A big problem our audience discovered was that our draft digipak shape was rectangle, opposed to square like it was supposed to be. We took these criticisms and went away to plan a second draft. While researching for inspiration, we saw the album cover for “The Stripes”. We used this as an idea to incorporate into our digipak and soon created a second attempt. We showed another group of people and they loved our font choice and the way we had presented our font scheme. We were pleased with our audience feedback upon our second attempt and overall liked how it looked. Without asking our audience again, we wouldn’t have been able to change our digipak to suit the ideas of our audience.

In addition, there was a split decision among the group members as to what logo design to use. We had three similar ones but couldn’t decide which looked more authentic. We asked a group of people to pick which they liked and from this we knew which to pick. As well as questionnaires and individual feedback, we used surveys to find out certain font choices and styles which our audience preferred. These were effective as they gave as a clear to the point answer and we evidence them on our blog.


In conclusion, initial research into our target audience age of the Crystal Whites band, and our audience feedback upon our video and print products played an integral role in shaping our final work. As a group we were able to tailor our drafts, to create a final piece of sustainable work that our audience could enjoy. This was important to us because our main aim of this project was to present our audience with something they like. We took on board all our negatives and positives as we valued the opinion of our audience. This was especially true when members of my group were certain that their idea was best, despite what our audience feedback had already told us. They realised after, that the key element is making sure our audience is happy and soon changed their mind.

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